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Very good conclusion.___________________________________________
Your group is the only one that wove in the thesis statement very seamlessly.
It’s short and to the point, but very powerful.
Source for exercise (includes the complete essay):
Cell [Mobile] Phone Use Should be Banned While Driving._________________________________________
Note: the original essay does NOT have good internal documentation, but, for this exercise, we were concerned only with developing solid introductions and conclusions.
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